I Am Who I Am Comments

u r such a great person and life gets tuff but god never make a wall u can't climb over but he knows it will take tiem but u will see the brighter side when u reach it! ! i believe that life will get great in the future and yeah it is great so yeah love ya have fun and don't worry life is to short to worry! ! !

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TJ Daniels 14 April 2008

Becoming Me. Like Greenwolfe, I also have difficulty reading Looooooooong poems, but your words kept me reading. You may only be 15, but you have an inner depth that most people will never have. It is very difficult to put emotions and inner feelings into words, but you are able to do that. My fave words are: I thank her (for) each breath I breathe. I also gave it a 10. After reading the poem I loved title. Becoming Me. Your other poem is just as strongly worded, with a very strong, heartfelt message. TJ

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