I'm not much of a poet- I like to write stories instead, but in my creative writing class, we're in out 'Poetry Unit' and my teacher is making us sign up in a petry website so we can get TRUE, HONEST feeback about our poems.
So...lay it on me, my fellow poets! I'm ready for it!
Stranger with the bright blue eyes
who claims to be my friend,
how often that you lie to me
your heart I cannot mend
...
As the sands of time fall away
Like the leaves on an autumn tree
To a place where redemption meets soul everyday
And grants the thoughts of thee
...
The clouds float on by
And they float on by for you
Sometimes wispy cirrus
The clouds float on by
...
Please take me there, to the city of wind,
A palace were the mind can wonder
Where clouds are daily dealings with your dreams
As above us they merrily dance
...