my name is lala and i appreciate all comments which i may recieve which can help me progress as a poet.
thank you
My dad's gone
I never felt so alone
I wish i could say goodbye
but then again i wish it was a lie
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am lying on my pillow
watching you looking out the window
why dont you know that i want you
i toss and turn thinking when you will learn
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can i take a second of your time
to tell you about boy of mine?
hes lovly and tall
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i wonder what we will be
i wonder hat we will see
i wonder if it will be you i kiss
or will it be you i miss
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