Raman Savithiri

Rookie - 136 Points (22-May-1969 / Coimbatore, Tamil Nadu, India)

677. Dont Make Reasons Please! -150210 - Poem by Raman Savithiri

When You stand as a magnet mountain
How is that I am attached to the world?
Can’t You drag and me, in You sustain?
How long will I wait near Your threshold?

Don’t say please, iron covered with dust
Will never sense the waves of magnet
Don’t say please, soul covered with lust
Will not get Your grace, caught in life net

When You glow as a Sun of dazzling flames
Can’t You burn my dirt and make me deserve
When You flow as a holy Ganges with foams
Can’t You wash me and a place in You reserve?

Don’t say please, iron covered with dust
Will never sense the waves of magnet
Don’t say please, soul covered with lust
Will not get Your grace, caught in life net --150210


Comments about 677. Dont Make Reasons Please! -150210 by Raman Savithiri

  • (2/22/2010 6:20:00 AM)


    nice poem
    i like it
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  • (2/16/2010 4:29:00 AM)


    One surprising thing you know?

    I was reading an article by one Michelle
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    The Law Of Magnetic Attraction: You've heard this before. Like attracts like.
    Does this mean that squirrels only attract squirrels to themselves? And does this mean that the ocean only attracts water to itself? And so does this also mean that the refrigerator only attracts food to itself?
    How about the fact that the television attracts people into it and out of it? As well as the parks attracting playfulness, joy, togetherness, love, happiness, letting go, laughter, peace, food, sport equipment, books and so on to itself?
    And the bookstores attracting books and all kinds of people, projects, visions and intentions to them? And so how does money attract money to itself? ? ? ?

    Now moving the magnet to your brain, Right Now. What kind of thoughts are you having? This magnet of yours that is in harmony with the Universal Energy is attracting what to you? Is attracting what kind of people to you? And is attracting what kind of situations to you? And so what is going on here. Deep within our sub/un-conscious minds we have some beliefs as well that this magnet is attracting to us.
    Let us think of this Magnet as our friend pointing us to the truth every day. Our friend the Magnet is the Universe's way of saying 'I love you and I care about you'. Go forth knowing that you have the Power and the know how to create a very loving and fulfilled life for yourselves and all of humanity.
    To be complete is to be complete within. To be complete within is to surrender to the Divine Love within each and every one us guiding us, protecting us and truly eternally present for us.
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    I realize that great people can think in a different way and deliver them in simpler languages which people like me can eat/drink and digest

    Again well written; keep writing
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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 15, 2010



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