Tuesday, September 30, 2008

A Bridge Over Troubled Water Comments

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By: Poet Keri
September 30,2008
Freeverse
Age 11
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Stephanie Fiddy 11 December 2008

Wow i'm amazed that you wrote this at 11! At that age i couldn't even write Cat with Hat! You truely have an amazing talent But some i recomment you keep a syllable count and try to create a rhythem. Some lines are a bit long and others too short. Don't worry this happens to me too :) Best of luck -Stephanie

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