A Caterpillar's Dream Comments

Well today have read too many poems from a young writer and now back to yours. Feel this is true poem - with rhyme, like singing a song; with pictures, like watching a painting or a movie; with amazingly beautiful descriptions, always making the reader fascinated. Look at these lines: Fear clings to flesh as dew clings to a rose, Eyes like shutters slowly open then swiftly close. ... The breath of wind caress a caterpillar's dream ... Cocoons of time sow gifts of wings to give flight, Blessed with the presence of a rose's kiss good night. Really really like them so much.

Interesting read, doesn't quite make me want to be a caterpillar. Nicely elegant to read though.