A Command Poem by James Sutherland-Smith

A Command

Do not trust the stars.
They arrive when words sleep
and induce the ghost of pure noise.
The Milky Way reels above you.
Its furthest energy began
to reach towards you before
our first gutturals were uttered
while its nearest source of light could,
At this moment, no longer exist.
Be disturbed
by the church's mineral chime,
the unscuffed grid for hopscotch
chalked on the pavement and the ash leaf
its tissue worn away to a pattern
of veins. It is held beneath
a translucent glaze of ice
like a specimen on a slide.
It is certain enough.
It is not permanent.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this in Matlock during my training as a teacher whilst living digs in Starkholmes beyond old Matlock in the photograph. The church in the poem and photograph is Saint Giles and the house in the foreground is the former Old King's Head inn, the oldest building in Matlock which I visited with our History lecturer, the late Angus Watson in 1973 and which is now owned and lived in by one of my sisters. A Command was the first of my poems to be translated into Slovak and published and broadcast in Slovakia.
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