Saturday, April 30, 2011

A Dream Of School Supplies Comments

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I had a dream of school supplies,
where paperclips could talk;
where poster paper hung around
with marking pens and chalk.
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khadija bouterfas
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James Fitzpatrick 02 January 2015

Well done. Keep writing it is very lyrical, as you build your diction you will improve your tone although I still like it as it is for now. Congrats

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