A Letter To The Moon Poem by Ailbhe Eighteen

A Letter To The Moon

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I was with the moon last night,
I'm with him again tonight;
With all the glittering dots beside;
Lavishing me with delight;
We dance in their thrones all night,
Yet they were there up high,
I am here just not nigh.


May I voyage to the moon,
Take me there with you;
Let me gaze closely like when I'm in bed;
Let me know your secrets;
Let me run with you in the dark;
Let me see you,
Let me see you.

May we have a talk all night,
When my pillow cannot rivet my tears;
When my blanket cannot warmth my frame;
When my bed cannot hold me;
When all this world makes me cry;
May I stare at you closely,
No, may you take me there,
May I come to you.

Thursday, March 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: moon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
bri edwards 13 April 2019

U use " nigh" for " near" i believe. not sure it 'fits' (for me) , but a nice rhyme and i guess you are not physically near the moon but still a good dancing partner i'll bet. rivet: " hold (someone or something) fast so as to make them incapable of movement." OK i think having a love affair with the moon is lunacy! ! ! ! ! to MyPoemList and i think into my May showcase of PH poems, which i'm starting to prepare. Thanks. bri :)

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