A Man And His Music ~ A Dedication To Joe Comments
Rating: ★5.0
The lights flash across the stage
And from the left he enters and waves
The crowd stands and screams his name
He nods his head and a smile touches his lips
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Nice use of detail. However, I would like a word choice that is a little less predictable. For example, the third line of the next-to-last-stanza's image of weaving a story is 'predictable.' The third line of the final stanza 'real as the sunshine on the lake' is an unpredictable and interesting image - one that I truly enjoy mulling over. It is so open to multiple meaning.
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Nice use of detail. However, I would like a word choice that is a little less predictable. For example, the third line of the next-to-last-stanza's image of weaving a story is 'predictable.' The third line of the final stanza 'real as the sunshine on the lake' is an unpredictable and interesting image - one that I truly enjoy mulling over. It is so open to multiple meaning.