I enjoyed your poem - I liked your brisk, economical tone -I felt close to this man
or at least his essence as nothing got in the way - maybe the last line staggered
a bit - I'd have liked to seen the poem end with the second last line - maybe with a
dedication at the top - thankyou for this poem
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I enjoyed your poem - I liked your brisk, economical tone -I felt close to this man or at least his essence as nothing got in the way - maybe the last line staggered a bit - I'd have liked to seen the poem end with the second last line - maybe with a dedication at the top - thankyou for this poem