Thursday, January 2, 2003

A Man For All Seasons Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mickey Mantle died today
Old #7 has passed away
He would die of cancer so they say
But old #7 he sure could play
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Jennifer Barnard 03 May 2005

I enjoyed your poem - I liked your brisk, economical tone -I felt close to this man or at least his essence as nothing got in the way - maybe the last line staggered a bit - I'd have liked to seen the poem end with the second last line - maybe with a dedication at the top - thankyou for this poem

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