A Message From The Heart Poem by Marijo Pinero

A Message From The Heart

Rating: 4.3


Your heart throbs like giving you a message;
Take care of Me (your heart)
and I'll take care of you.
Do not abuse Me (your heart) or I'll have to avenge Me
At supper, you can drink house wine
Maybe a glass of red is fine
No less no more
Please do give Me (your heart) a favor
I would make your life comfortable
If you promise to keep Me (your heart) away from trouble.


Marijo (2007)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edgar Andrade Baguio 22 September 2008

The persona in this poem is timid about wine, but not as something for her heart. I like the two last lines. You get 10 then! Nice one.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 September 2008

a scarlet wish from a true heart by the prayer passion aspires fror the gleams of moon ness...............wounderfully wrought by the imagery, heart yet needs thrum, yet luscious green across the gentle breath of togetherness,10+, thanks for sharing

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Tanya Stanford 17 September 2008

Very sincere and sweet. Lovely little composition.

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