A Nightmare Poem by Amer Rizwan

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Amer Rizwan

Amer Rizwan

Sabirabad. Karak. NWFP. Pakistan.

A Nightmare

Rating: 5.0


How to find the missing beam
How to trace the subtle gleam
When things are not what they seem

Tears n blood flowing in a stream
In shady dark dales with no seam
Rubbing my eyes if it be a dream
But things are not what they seem

Taking a bath in this bloody brook
Is what they mean dear what they book
Doth you know what does it mean?
Trooth, prophesy or a bad dream
Ah! But things are not what they seem

An infernal lake at a stone’s throw
Sucking all the blood, I trow
Trickling tears tearing the tryst
The pool getting bigger with no rest
Laying its ebby arms on gray n green
But things are not what they seem

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Syed Mohsin Shayan 08 June 2009

I found the theme really peculiar and interesting, yet as a poet myself I had to be critical in looking to that. I could not get through the line where you say, 'Is what they mean dear what they book? ', would you please explain what do you mean here. I think you want to ask that do they really mean to do what they are claiming? the next thing was u used some words like 'Trooth' and 'Trow'. I found the word 'Troth' meaning a solemn pledge or a vow, but the aforementioned words were not found in dictionary, so are these any slangs which I'm not aware of? Please if you can clarify. Otherwise, the peom was wonderful, especially I like the way it comes to an end. Hope to see a response from you.

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Robert Jack 11 February 2009

A real pleasue to to have read the poem

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Azhar Ali Khan 11 February 2009

An excellent poem written in the backdropp of growing terrorism in Pakistan. Full marks to the poet.

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Amer Rizwan

Amer Rizwan

Sabirabad. Karak. NWFP. Pakistan.
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