Wednesday, December 9, 2009

A Place In The Sky Comments

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There's a place on my mind
That I'd love to go.
It's a place in the sky
And the birds know the road.
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Daniel Kempson 06 January 2010

There is a lot of promise in this poem Ashley, onwards and upwards I say 10 Daniel, keep writing

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Dereck Gibbs 14 December 2009

'Children we are, and children we grow. A place in the sky where we dream to go. Never give up and never fall back. Because an imagination is what most adults lack.' i like dat one....we have no choice but to grow up but we can choose to grow up....

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Ashley Wade

Ashley Wade

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