Crying comes naturally in this house,
no tears of joy, but of hate and fear.
Screaming engulfs these walls.
Pain from the physical attacks,
...
Read full text
You put so much pain into your verse, the images are disturbingly vivid.
A powerful and moving piece. The cries echo well beyond the walls.
wow.... thats really good...... the words... are strong, they really mean stuff... great write :)