Wednesday, February 6, 2008

A Place Of Tears Comments

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Crying comes naturally in this house,
no tears of joy, but of hate and fear.
Screaming engulfs these walls.
Pain from the physical attacks,
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Miranda Oney
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Miranda Van Yperen 22 August 2009

wow.... thats really good...... the words... are strong, they really mean stuff... great write :)

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You put so much pain into your verse, the images are disturbingly vivid.

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Cynthia Murney 07 February 2008

A powerful and moving piece. The cries echo well beyond the walls.

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Miranda Oney

Miranda Oney

Upper Hayford, England
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