Monday, September 24, 2012

A Solitary Rose Comments

Rating: 3.5

A solitary rose in the garden
Whispered to herself
These thorns are for my safety
Alas! Still they pluck me up
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Navya Kumar
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Daniel Einstein 26 September 2012

Beautiful as she was, she felt no need to leave but was forced even when she insisted not to. Good piece, keep it up.

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