Thursday, February 14, 2008

A Toast! Comments

Rating: 5.0

stepped into a day
That was wild and gray.
A flourish of gold leaves trimmed the blast
As a kaleidoscope of memories of you ushered past.
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Mary Naylor
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Alison Cassidy 28 February 2008

This is such a youthful poem, filled with optimism and buoyancy. I love 'corsages crackly with age'. You words are a wonderful advertisement for the value of writing poetry to keep you young and interesting. Splendid poetry. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 25 February 2008

Very lovely. Time will have us all, but memories are forever. Take care, my friend. Love, Sandra

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Meggie Gultiano 24 February 2008

A beautiful piece, Mary..A shining hope for the two of you will someday meet..A toast!

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Mary Naylor

Mary Naylor

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