A Weeping Lad's Dream Comments

The lad shuts himself up in his chamber And dreams Fail to encumber this lad's ascent The lad has not woken, he sleeps still, Dreaming the dreams he knows he'll have to kill. succoming to forlorn dreams and getting depressed... sould never be the lad's future. the future is wide and bright and full of light. wake from your slumber dear Lad and work hard. you are going to achieve....... thank you for your imagination and the use of words and phrases in this fine poem. tony