A Weird World Poem by Aashish Kalra

A Weird World



THE SUN IS DROWNING,
AND THE WINDS ARE FROWNING.
THE LEAVES MINGLE,
AND THE CHIMES JINGLE.
THE CALMNESS IS BREAKING THE HEART,
TO FIND THE END OF THE START.
THE MORTAL DOES ITS JOB PROPERLY,
BUT ITS HEART IS STILL LONLEY.
THE AMBITION IS OVER POWERING,
AS OVER THE WORLD THE SKY IS LAUGHING.
THE WORK WILL ALWAYS PAY,
BUT THERE’S NO ONE TO SWAY.
THERE’S A HAPPINESS IN THE PAIN,
CUZ ALL THE SUCCESS IS IN VAIN.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harpreet Kaur 01 March 2009

Dear Aashish, Your expressions are beautiful, yet very deep. You are bringing lot of noise observed in the outside world. A bit of turbulence as noticed. You can look for calm and stillness or even may be meaningful silence within this as well to refine further the deeper expression. Good work. Keep it up.Bye.

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Aashish Kalra

Aashish Kalra

Jalandhar, Punjab; India.
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