Absent. Poem by haidee blanche

Absent.

Rating: 5.0


I panic as you let your tears flow in front of me.

I understood that it was not about us.

But those eyes were too lonely

that you were shattering me into pieces.

January 31,2008

Monday, July 21, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: january,lonely
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Haidee Blanch 22 July 2008

thank you so much. hope you'll check out my other entries and appreciate them too :)

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Keith Foley 21 July 2008

Sweet. Strong. Sad. Enjoyed it.

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