Absent. Poem by haidee blanche

Absent.

Rating: 5.0


I panic as you let your tears flow in front of me.

I understood that it was not about us.

But those eyes were too lonely

that you were shattering me into pieces.

January 31,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Haidee Blanch 22 July 2008

thank you so much. hope you'll check out my other entries and appreciate them too :)

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Keith Foley 21 July 2008

Sweet. Strong. Sad. Enjoyed it.

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