Adam Outside Paradise Poem by JoJo Hsu

Adam Outside Paradise

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You are Adam first, I was Adam second
The world was born, the sun woke up from the mountain,
Ignited the moonlight, animals have not yet created,
Riverside pavilion rose purple, rock that
Slippery smoke, writing unrecognizable plaque.
The body because of the struggle with the creation and gradually thorough.

Adam, Adam, have you ever seen the Father's toe?
Adam did not get the second answer, I saw away
From the hands and feet of seven springs, a city, by the sun by
Bandage of the erosion, farm tools, armor, machinery,
Slowly molten off the time, waiting for the earnest.

Adam Ah Adam, whether we exist before others,
Or is it just as pale as a stone?
Adam did not get the second answer, he killed the brothers,
The first fell, into the rest of the animals, Adam became one.
Adam waited for his Eve, lonely to the end of time.

Monday, June 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: eve,paradise
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 23 June 2017

Adam, Adam, have you ever seen the Father's toe? Adam Ah Adam, whether we exist before others, Adam waited for his Eve, lonely to the end of time. a fine presentation of paradise in a different way. very nice poem my dear poet. thank you. tony

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Shimizu Mizuhala 25 June 2017

I'm glad you like it! Thanks!

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