Monday, June 17, 2013

Adrift Comments

Rating: 4.5

Lost in a sea of abandoned dreams
and disillusionment.
Treading water for a breath
of hope.
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raquel stevenson
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Kelly Seale 17 June 2013

adrift in a sea of depression... your dreams quickly dissapearing in a dark whirlpool. Only one means of escape lay before you...the illusion of hope. raquel...do not lose this illusion..for in it is something totally unexpected, .. a friend. Great Write! Intense! ! ! ; -) Kelly.

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