Thursday, February 23, 2012

Age Of Innocence Comments

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Invisibly travelling hoping for someone,
to release him from bondage, trapped like a abalone.
Emotionally handicapped for someone to hear his cry,
but yet everyone is deaf no matter how hard he try.
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Areeba Sohail 25 February 2012

its ok i just wanted to correct my dumb english! thnx!

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Malaika Rebello 24 February 2012

yes Areeba it is sacrificing, sorry about it typing error and thanks wini, i still have to read your poem tree

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Malaika Rebello 24 February 2012

yes Areeba it is sacrificing, sorry about it typing error and thanks wini, i still have to read your poem tree

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Areeba Sohail 23 February 2012

i need to correct my spellings so i wud like to ask whats the spelling of sacrifising is it sacrificing or the one that u had written i wonder pls correct me!

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Areeba Sohail 23 February 2012

this is gareeba-ur classmate, madam very nice write keep up the good work! such difficult english language gr8, its so nice!

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Wini Jose 23 February 2012

great write i liked it i too have submitted a gareeb poem! ! ! ! ! just check it out. its the tree

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