Invisibly travelling hoping for someone,
to release him from bondage, trapped like a abalone.
Emotionally handicapped for someone to hear his cry,
but yet everyone is deaf no matter how hard he try.
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yes Areeba it is sacrificing, sorry about it typing error and thanks wini, i still have to read your poem tree
yes Areeba it is sacrificing, sorry about it typing error and thanks wini, i still have to read your poem tree
i need to correct my spellings so i wud like to ask whats the spelling of sacrifising is it sacrificing or the one that u had written i wonder pls correct me!
this is gareeba-ur classmate, madam very nice write keep up the good work! such difficult english language gr8, its so nice!
great write i liked it i too have submitted a gareeb poem! ! ! ! ! just check it out. its the tree
its ok i just wanted to correct my dumb english! thnx!