Friday, March 7, 2008

All About Father Comments

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Tough from the out, soft inside,
With him begins life's ride.

A friend in enemy's disguise,
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Kalky Inkler
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Glancy A 20 April 2008

Hmmm nice. You have go a rhyme going on in this one. a lot of contrast and antithesis going on....but I am missing some feel...I am not getting any feel of emotion from your poem.

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