All Is Gone Poem by kelly Martini

All Is Gone



When all is gone
When all is lost
Life will disappear
From this world
We live in peace
Till the world ends

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neil Marsden 12 October 2008

Hi Kelly, If this and several of your other poems that I have read are anything to go by then you have every reason to continue to share your incredible talents with the like of me and every other reader on here! Personally speaking I, like yourself held my writing under lock and key for over 30 years and the feeling of relief when I recently did publish for the first time was beyond description, I only hope that you continue to get a positive reaction to your amazing writing. I believe that self confidence does go a long way towards bringing out the best in a poet but this obviously comes with time, I can't wait to watch your obvious skills develop - try to believe in yourself! Take care. Neil.

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