All That Glitters Is Not Gold Poem by Lil Love Goddess vs. Angel of Death

All That Glitters Is Not Gold

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She stands there with her mistifying beauty
With her perfect arm reached out towards me
But something told me to stray away
I fought with all my might not to stay
But she was so gorgeous
With everything she was willing to bless
I took a step closer into her most radiant light
Her face was so smooth, Her eyes were so bright
She had the most astonishing glow
Yet in the pit of my stomach, something said no
I didnt know witch to follow
My body, my mind, or my soul
She stood and watched as I contemplated
When I looked up she patiently waited
She was more beautiful than Aphrodite could have dreamed
She looked like the queen of queens
I inched a little closer to her perplex charm
She still awaited me with an outreached arm
The ping in my stomach still told me to run
But I don't really understand what from
She had to be and angel fallen from above
Here to bless me with all of her love
I was stuck i didn't know what to do
I wasn't even sure of all of this was true
But I decided to Ignore what was telling me in the back of my mind
That this was wrong, I ignored my sign
I went towards her and grabbed her hand
Then she changed into a hideous demon
She said in the most terrifying voice
If I wanted to live I had to make a choice
She could kill me now, but make the pain prolong
Or I could give her my soul and exist on
My choice was simple I wanted to survive
So I had nothing to do except give her my life
My body is still here, but now she owns me
My soul is lost, gone for eternity
I fell for her illusion, and now it's to late
Heed my words don't make the same mistake
Follow God he is the only way
I regret not listening to him, to this day
All that glitters is not gold
Maybe if I listened this saying, My story wouldn't have to be told

7/27/2010

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 August 2010

My body is still here, but now she owns me My soul is lost, gone for eternity I fell for her illusion, and now it's to late, , , , very nive but realized very late in life..better late than never, v. good lesson in life......10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 31 July 2010

Instinctive ‘Ping’ was alarm…well instinct works and helps better …[may be] God sent the ‘Ping’ or your inner vibe spoke like that…its like narrative poetry…wonderfully crafted… Finally [conversely] it can be said ‘All gold does not glitter’…me a woman so I used the metaphor gold to indicate women… thanks for sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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