Monday, November 22, 2010

All You Comments

Rating: 0.0

Everytime i think about your smile, i smile.
When i think about your eyes, im hypnotized.
I think about your touch and im on fire.
I close my eyes and remember hearing you say i love you;
...
Read full text

Geo xxxx
COMMENTS
Oladele Noah 22 November 2010

Emotion and poetry are the same. Your emotion is running into words. You should have personified the qualities of your lover. Keep writing.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success