Hannah Camille Dizon

Rookie - 95 Points (August 25,2000)

Almost - Poem by Hannah Camille Dizon

It has been years
But you are still the reason behind these tears
Everytime you talk to me,
my feelings are coming back easily.

they said you loved me too.
how i wish that was true.
but why didn't you tell me?
i guess we're really not meant to be.

you were almost mine
i need to move on but i can't see the sign
we found love without the proper timing
and now, all we have is nothing.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship, love and loss, love and pain

Form: Blank Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

About a girl and a boy who found love at the wrong time. they love ach other but they just didn't admit and tell what they feel so they end up at nothing.

Comments about Almost by Hannah Camille Dizon

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (12/13/2015 1:55:00 AM)


    you were almost mine
    i need to move on but i can't see the sign
    we found love without the proper timing
    and now, all we have is nothing. a passionate story of love. communication is sooooo important in a love. you have brought in this point very well. thank you. tony
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  • (11/14/2015 11:14:00 PM)


    A superb love poem highlighting the draw backs of lack of communication between lover and his beloved that hamper fruition of their love story. It emphasizes need of communicating the love to the loved one if love is to be successful. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 14, 2015



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