Wednesday, July 8, 2009

Am Picture Imperfect Comments

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I gave you something of mine
you went and lost it.
Now am left with broken pieces
no matter how much i try
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dhana laxmi
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Ted M 08 July 2009

Your feelings have been communicated really well in this poem.

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Shagun Khera 08 July 2009

well woven feelings...nice and cosy read! !

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