Anorexic Peach Poem by M.L. Emmett

Anorexic Peach

Rating: 4.0


You're only seventeen -
the light seems to shine
right through you,
peach-furred skin
dessicated
drawn in upon itself
- and old.

Your moisture-dewed youth
has evaporated.
It's been emptied
sucked clean
dried and drained.

You reach out
with snappable wrists
Your brittle bones
bulge and bow.

Your ribs vibrate
with every breath
air thrills and ripples
the whole chest cavity.

Your hands and feet
Minnie Mouse big
too big
for the fragile framed
tiny dancer.
Your hips have become
pelvic bone butterflies
that arch and flare out
from your sunken abdomen
concave
and strangely hung
with loose folds of skin.

Your eyes like oases
in the desert of you
cartoon-cute big
but sunken deep
into your head
as if drawing away
from the sight of you.


Just a few more Kilos
and you'll be gone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tim Stensloff 14 June 2012

This is pretty good, but you need to change the title. There's some really solid imagery, so I'm sure you could come up with a more eye-catching name for it. Excellent poem otherwise.

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M.L. Emmett

M.L. Emmett

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