Anticapation Poem by W.I. Stoneberger

Anticapation

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The May breeze off the ocean is still too cold,
though it's calling.
Summer will soon seduce us
with the startle of the sun
and the sweat-stained, narcotic nights.
We'll wander into the wilderness,
shedding our inhibitions and our old skins.
We'll go skinny-dipping in moonshine,
and dance across the dunes
until the season goes down.

Monday, May 11, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: dance,ocean
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

You painted lovely pictures in Anticipation. 'summer will seduce us with the startle of the sun and the sweat-stained, narcotic nights'. The best picture for me was the skinny-dipping in the moonshine, and dancing across the dunes. The last line tops it all off beautifully. 10 Karin Anderson

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