Thursday, April 17, 2008

Antique Heart Comments

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You tore my heart from my sleeve
And wore it as your own,
Replacing the broken and tarnished one
That you had too long,
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Emily Cari Clifford
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Jurietta Duraan 17 April 2008

Absolutely beautiful poem and imagery! I love the way you gave your heart away for him to wear on his sleeve.... please read my poem 'That boy has my heart! ' - you might find similarities... although on a simpler scale. Thanks, and well done. Yuri*

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Emily Cari Clifford

Emily Cari Clifford

Caerphilly, South Wales
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