Like a cold wind, you breezed through in one
unguarded moment without saying goodbye...
Leaving me alone in chills, in emptiness, in loneliness,
Now I must carry on life meant for the two of us.
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The poem is good and under control. On my brother's demise I wrote 'The Night You Left'; your poem reminded me of that, so felt like sharing. Kumar Vikram New Delhi