As we hide in the tree's
I reload suddenly
as footsetps
rustle the leaves.
I start to sweat
as i think of death.
my seargant shoots
the enemy falls to the floor
Booooooooooooooooooooooooooom! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
We are the resistance
fighting in France.
Me and my friends
are injured
as black suited men
approach
and order us to our feet-
My dad is in the
trench taking
my honour
Hi Luke. This poem is really good, especially for someone as young as you. It is really good to see and read a young poet such as yourself, and i think you will eventually turn into a famous poet. I love the Boooooooooooooooommmmmm! ! ! ! ! bit, its really clever and expressess the sound really well. Well done Luke Owen
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Luke I have just read your new poem and I think it is amazing even better than the others.Hope I DO this correctly it seems you never got my last message. Machstick grandad is out with Benjy but Iknow he will be really impressed when he reads this new one keep writing love nan