Thursday, September 17, 2009

As I Lie On The Ground And Stare Into Space... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lie on the ground,
and stare into space,
the stars start to move,
into the shape of your face.
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corey pugh
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irina Cole 13 April 2012

How beautiful! It is incredible.Only mountains stars and love!

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Danny H 17 September 2009

this is absolutely beautiful whoever this is for, recite it to them! . im favoriting this is was incredible. amazing format and choice of words

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 17 September 2009

Great use of descriptive language, lovely words, touching idea that smoothly flows. Well done

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