Tuesday, November 29, 2011

As You Lay Sleeping Comments

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As you lay sleeping peacefully in bed
While you are dreaming; sweet dreams in you head.
I watch you in slumber with eyes filled with love
It’s a love that’s so rare so few even know of.
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Paul (ChryWizard) Posney
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Rod Mendieta 06 September 2017

Though echoing a feeling already expressed a zillion times before in song and poetry, this is very well written and inspiring, the sort of feeling that we all must endeavour to cultivate and make spring at least once in our lives. Minor point: perhaps ypu meant ' I think TOO of the life'.

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