Saturday, February 20, 2010

At The End Of A Perfect Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

feel the warmth beneath your feet
sand between your toes
the wind in your hair
under the rays of the gleaming sun ☼
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 20 February 2010

‘…for all perfect days wont last forever…’ Why? ? Poets are always optimistic… In both [-] ve and [+] ve side… I feel that you’re expression looming in me all [+] ve though you’ve made a poetic twist and curve at the end…. 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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