Monday, March 27, 2006

Auckland City Rangers Comments

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With a clink and a clank go the strider's
Down the deserted street
Trailing a rusty blade
He slopes through the darkness
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Ashley Hawkes
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Phillip Sawatzky 10 April 2006

Kill that Disco Clown! I say. Something got a hold on me, Ashley, I like your style, though I think you could make it more actively engaging by simple changes in line breaks and verb use. Hey, but its your voice and I like how you sing. Phillip

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Ashley Hawkes

Ashley Hawkes

Hawera, Taranaki, New Zealand
Ashley Hawkes
Ashley Hawkes
Hawera, Taranaki, New Zealand
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