Thursday, September 7, 2023

August And Aurora Comments

Rating: 5.0

Counting the weeks to pass as the moon replaces the sun,
Until the new outweighs the old, emotion weighs a ton.
I kept the pain in silence; I kept the promise like an oath.
From flesh to flesh and bones to bones, the numbness is an outgrowth.
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COMMENTS
M H 09 September 2023

THis is crazily made, thanks for this

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Julrick Verallo 09 September 2023

'From flesh to flesh and bones to bones' the emotion is so on point

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CJ DG 09 September 2023

I just realize that we have to put something to ourselves, not to give everything to other people.

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Acir Eryat 08 September 2023

'Midnights are my aurora' what a line,

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S December 08 September 2023

wellpenned poem, power 5

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S S 08 September 2023

'My plea is my sacred song; my cry is my cruel chant.' i like this line, this is 5 for me

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