Awake In The Night Poem by erika ayrezzzzz

Awake In The Night

Rating: 4.5


As I lay here awake the clock strikes 3
Lost and upset, without any glee.

Memories and days that you have forgot
In my dreams and every little thought.

After a while the time is four
Outside my window it will rain and pour.

You've moved on but here I lay
remembering the past day after day.

As tears run down while I weep,
maybe tomorrow I can get some sleep.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Swapnil Baral 27 January 2008

Erica, I have read two of your poems and I feel that you have written both for me and my life. I have had similar experience.

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Very vivid, a lot of pain and sleepless night.

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Erica Lee 27 January 2008

Wow... I love it! I can clearly imagine the scne of this poem. So lovely.

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