Battle Comments

I can hear this in my head as a song. It's beautifully descriptive...I imagine scenes from this movie The Bunker as the film is eerily shot and portraying bodies of dead German soldiers scattered among the field. When I read this, I feel the loss when all you wanted was for her to stay. The only thing I would change is to add another stanza and draw it back to the killing fields you describe in the beginning of the poem. Lovely.