Monday, December 5, 2011

Becoming One With God Comments

Rating: 4.5

Silently skipping along the Suwannee’s edge,
Listening to the swift waters give their pledge,
Quickly carrying the Earths excess to the sea,
Where a hot sun awaits to set the purity free.
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Joseph Blitch
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Kevin Halls 05 December 2011

What an awesome poem Joseph I love your words and your rhyming theme too. You have brought the feel of nature to your poem which isn't easy to do so well done.

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