Wednesday, June 7, 2017

Being Comments

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Unique things that born on earth,
They can walk with two feet
And hold with another,
They can talk, they can think,
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Melmar Mercado
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Dr Antony Theodore 18 June 2017

They can do unbelievable things, Peaceful paradise became troublesome places, Least are selfless, much were selfish Where you think you're belong. Very interesting poem. depicting your great mind. These are the points that i collected from your poem. Thank you dear poet.

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Melmar Mercado 30 June 2017

thanks for your comment, I appreciate it

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