Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Bereaved Comments

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Awaken memories check in, like a sudden gust of wind
The loss of loved ones, their absence felt within
You indulge in reminiscence, longing to clasp them with your fingers
Only a whiff of air brushes against your palm, and the grief lingers
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Tricia D'cruz 14 September 2011

Thank you, Stefanie. You made my day :)

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Stefanie Fontker 14 September 2011

Very beautiful, I can feel the despair in this poem. This is amazing, keep on writing.

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