Best Friends Poem by black broken heart

Best Friends

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me and alicha
best of mates
Alicha an average
15 year old girl
who falls in love,
she knows the risks
yet she goes for him anyway
he breaks her heart and
she goes to her best friend for help...

...she calls me and says...
'Teddies don’t hug back but sometimes their all you've got'
and she hangs up the phone
i race to her house, ,
i see her sitting in her bathroom
with a knife to her wrists
'ALICHA! NO!
Don’t do this
i love you, i need you'
i say tears running down my face
'i have to do this,
my heart is broken'
she places her hand over her chest
she rips open her shirt
and there was a broken heart
engraved in her chest
i kneel down in front of her
i take hold of her hand
i then unbutton my shirt
and she see's a broken heart
engraved in my chest
'if your going to do it, ,
we will both do it together'
and i take her hand again
and we walk into the kitchen
and get a knife out of the draw
i place her hand on my chest
I then kiss her on the cheek
And tell her I love her
She kisses me back on the lips
And tells me she loves me.
I take the knife
And hold it to my wrist
Alicha takes her knife
And holds it to her wrist
“on the count of three
1… 2…are you ready? ”
I nod my head
“3”
We both slit our wrists
From one side to the other
we place the knifes on the bench
and hold each other close.
I fall to my knees,
And she soon follows
We both lie there dead
We in each others arms
…two best friends
Die hand in hand
Both in love…
…with eachother…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wandering Scarlet 22 June 2008

this is AWESOME maybe not great poetry at all....but the idea is so dementedly romantic it is amazing

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