Wednesday, May 1, 2013
Better Scars Comments
Rating: ★2.5
Behold my skin and my scars
They embrace one another
Like the twilight sky and the stars
Like there was no before; no after
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1/21/2026 5:16:35 AM # 1.0.0
Weakness: Shaking or nonexistent lyrical rhyme scheme. Needs raw emotion, feeling, drastical language, etc. Its to formal with the words like garment, labor, and triumph. Strength: Its a good idea, and the first paragraph is the best....write more like it and then you will have a real poem.