Sunday, February 7, 2010

Black And White Comments

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My world was gray,
Bruised all black and blue.
I stood alone in the dark,
A prey to be pounced upon.
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Medvilv V. 15 February 2010

Thank you for your suggestions. I choose Black and White for depicting both sides

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C. Keskuela 07 February 2010

I like Aldo's suggestion. I'd also suggest Torn Identity. or simply 'prey' You really explore the dark underbelly well!

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Aldo Kraas 07 February 2010

The title is The reality of my world I think that title is good

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