Saturday, November 7, 2009

Black Out (8/7/09) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The smoke comes out of my lungs
But stays in my mind
A cloud of despair hangs over my head
From what he left behind
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Melissa Leddy
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Allan O 07 November 2009

I admire your writing it is really good...sad but good...i feel our style blend some what thru your poetry... thanks Melissa ~^..^

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