Tuesday, November 25, 2014

Blessing Comments

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At dusk, when moon was coming up
fidelity was challenged.
No soul was searched.
It was the body scarred in bright sun.
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Satish Verma
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Rajnish Manga 26 November 2014

Thanks for this wonderful poem, Satish ji. The entire atmosphere is ethereal. Following two lines are very simple yet most impressive: One pink petal flew over the cloud / and landed on the lake.

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