Blocked Ascent Poem by Boston Kelley

Blocked Ascent



There I was walking through the green
meadows, strolling peacefully along.
Suddenly, I saw a mountain range in the
distance; one mountain stood taller than
the others, with a dot of bright light at its peak.
Eager to reach it, I quickened my pace, desiring
to grasp that light.
As I neared the mountain's summit, a gigantic hand
emerged from the ground.
A long arm followed it, and soon, the body of a
giant came from the ground.
It tilted its head down, grinning at me.
As I was paralyzed with fear and uncertainty,
my blood ran cold and my muscles stiffened.
The giant reached out a hand to grab me and I dashed
toward the left, eager to escape him and make the
climb, but his foot stomped in my way.
I sprinted toward the right, but his foot stopped me there
as well.
He reached down with both hands and I ran through the space between his legs toward the summit.
Desperate to flee from him, I climbed with all
my effort, putting considerable distance between
me and him.
However, as I crossed half the mountain's height,
his hand grabbed my foot.
I gripped the rock as hard as I could, digging my
fingertips into any crevice.
My strength was not enough to resist his pull,
so I let go of the rock.
Letting me stand on his hand, he said, with a charm
in his voice, 'Come with me, and you will find greater pleasure.'
Allured by his voice and promise, I cheerfully accepted.
He took me to a marshy land with rotting plants and thick, foul-smelling water, setting me down.
Realizing I had been tricked and forgotten the brilliant light at the mountain's peak, I fell to my knees, weeping
and heaving sighs.
I turned from the marsh and ran back toward the mountain,
knowing the light was better than the marsh.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem is an allegory representing my conflict with sexual sin. The brilliant light represents God, the mountain: the way toward God, the giant: sexual sin, evading his hands: me trying to run from the sin, the giant grabbing my feet: me being tempted to sexually sin, letting go of the rock: me giving into the sin, the giant's voice and words: the illusionary pleasure the sin possesses, the marshy land: the realization of how wrong the sin is, realizing I had been tricked: knowing I've sinned against God, running back to the mountain: me eager to get back to God.
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Boston Kelley

Boston Kelley

Fayetteville, Arkansas
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